WWW
I involved the audience,by asking questions
My powerpoint was good to look- it did not have alot of text
Well structured
Had Key concepts
I broke it up, by having a trailer
EBI
I asked questions about the trailer
have to comment on some of my blog posts
Targets
need to make more references to audience, uses/grats, and look at more genre theory.
research by using books
Genre Theory..
Look at other blogs...
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WWW:
Confident in her presentation
Summarised information well
Good Body Language
Well Structured
EBI:
Asked question about clip
Involved audience more
WWW:
-Images and clips used
-Short & summarised
-Understanding of text
EBI:
-Asked question and did analysis of clip used
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WWW:
- interaction with the audience
- good information and research
- great understanding of the text
EBI:
- Analysed the clip of the movie
www
knew about your topic and was very confident in the presentation.
ebi
got the audience involved
WWW:
Confident with the presentation
Researched her topic well
EBI:Involed the audience
WWW: didn't just read from her powerpoint, was confident and had an entertaining film clip =)
EBI: more analysis of film clip and interaction with audience
WWW:
confident within presenting skills
good use of images and clips, making the presentation more entertaining
good body language
very well structures slides - evolving to her point
excellent links made to her blog
EBI:
involved audience more
gave more information about theories
www:
Knows what she is talking about
Gets audience involved
Has done a lot of reaserch
EBI:
If it flowed more naturally without stuttering
www:
-You was confident when presenting, which kept us all engaged.
-You talked about comparison texts.
-You showed a good understanding of your text.
-You had good body language
EBI:
-You could of asked the audience about the clip you showed.
WWW
Good presenatational skills
Good knowledge of text
Good structure
EBI
Included theorists which would appeal to the text..it was good :)
WWW:
. Very good research i.e. the clip.
. Summarised all the info well
. Good understanding of the text
EBI:
. Try not to just read off the board.
. Engage the audience more.
. And not to have to much writing on each slide.
WWW:
*Good summary of information
*Interacted with the audience
*Good understanding of the text
EBI:
*If she practiced the presentation then she would know what to say better and would present to the audience instead of looking at the board
WWW:
*Good summary of information
*Interacted with the audience
*Good understainding of the text
EBI:
*If she practiced the presentation then it would be more fluent and she ould speak TO the audience and not just read the board
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